I have
assessed your blog in relation to P3, M3 & D3 of Unit 27 Scriptwriting. This criteria requires you to
answer the following question….
Have
you understood how to improve your script/s and been able to redraft it with
improvements?
Evidence:
More than one draft of your
script posted in your blog
- with progression between drafts demonstrated.
Joe, the evidence you have provided for Criteria
3 demonstrates that you have not yet achieved P3 at this point
in the process. Your posts require additional versions of the Soap Opera Script and analysis supporting the changes
made to your script. You need to demonstrate the development you have made since you began working on the unit by clearly exploring the reasons for the changes made.
Green = the level you are currently working
at .
Red= the areas you need to focus on to achieve the
next criteria
*You
will maintain this grade if you continue providing this level of detail,
examples and analysis in your blog posts. If you wish to improve your grade,
please look carefully at the annotated criteria provided below.
To achieve P3 of the Scriptwriting Unit, You should
include some evidence of the revision of your script There is a clear
distinction between the first draft of the script and your separate final
draft.
To achieve M3of the Scriptwriting Unit, You need to achieve all of the Pass criteria and
include detailed evidence of where and why changes have been made.
To achieve D3 of the Scriptwriting Unit, You should demonstrate a sense of continually
revising and an understanding that, the only reason revision stops is because
of given deadlines..